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【七律:逐臣】浮槎不负水深情 & “Tang revived American poetry”
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《七律:逐臣》

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到晓天涯始远京,浮槎不负水深情。 6park.com

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何虚前席平戎策?世外棋坛用上兵。 6park.com

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逍遥云飞诗友步韵赐和:

转世魂犹向两京
只因未了此间情
桃源春暖兰舟小
淇水风轻翠竹荣
横笛曲飞金凤至
吟诗韵动月光明
灵虚台上参棋道
坐定乾坤不用兵 6park.com

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小江倒步韵回和逍遥云飞诗友赐玉:

江南稻草出奇兵
中箭归来叩孔明
谁赋曹公横槊恨
我尊陶隐直腰荣
风流魏晋余新韵
气壮汉唐兴古情
飞剑英雄高手笔
云笺云雁上天京 6park.com

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玉帝如囚困玉京 6park.com

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小江倒步韵跟和逍遥云飞诗友雅律: 6park.com

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厚朴甘草先生赐和: 6park.com

野渡云飞沧海溟, 6park.com

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何处扁舟晓月升。 6park.com

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小江庚韵拙和甘草先生赐玉: 6park.com

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沉钟梦里发金声, 6park.com

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厚朴甘草先生原玉: 6park.com

云梦泽  6park.com

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十里红荷香曲径  6park.com

一轮明月照深庭  6park.com

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逍遥云飞诗友玉作: 6park.com

击浪腾空别北冥 长天万里任伶仃 化鲲化鸟逍遥梦 倒海翻云寂寞灵 登顶昆仑观世界 横眸宇宙叹皇庭 若逢希有相邀去 跳出蛮荒脱圄囹 6park.com

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寒斋 6park.com

虚囚字里海天灵 毫末鲲鱼归北溟 尚有冰心迎热血 终无炙手摘寒星 谁敲晓破开阳紫 自咏春临立野青 偷韵可怜饥鼠在 釆薇床下饱诗经 … 6park.com

The other day my wife asked me why Tang poetry mattered in America. Instead of an answer, I gave her a puzzled look despite myself. Frankly, she knew next to nothing about Chinese. So, how come she threw me this curveball question? Never mind. She had already landed in my lap, along with a copy of Cathay. Holy moly, it was good old Ezra Pound's Cathay, a slim volume containing 15 classical Chinese poems* rendered in English.**  6park.com

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Virtually Chinese-illiterate, Pound nonetheless picked up the Tang spirit and ran with it. Published in 1915, his Cathay ended up as a game changer for American literature in the roaring '20s. Soaring from Cathay was a Tang soul for all American literati to look up to, and they did. Indeed, the celebrated American poet T.S. Eliot rightly regarded Tang poetry as a breath of fresh air.# Eliot went on to collect a Nobel prize. Ernest Hemingway, another Nobel laureate, also had a taste of Tang, perhaps unknowingly, thanks to Cathay which gave rise to American modernism in the Jazz Age.  6park.com

Jazz reinvented American music to which my wife and I couldn’t help dancing. Tang revived American poetry with which we couldn’t help rhyming. There’s no daylight between Tang and Jazz. Both were in the moonlight. So were we. 6park.com

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Cathay is actually a collection of 17 poems, two of which ("The Seafarer" and "The Alchemist") have no roots in Chinese poetry.  6park.com

** To echo the ancient Chinese poems he was rewriting, Pound never shied away from archaic English. Let me cite two examples here: (1) Cathay refers to the Orient with China as its core. (2) In Cathaytoilet refers to dress-up and make-up. It comes from "toilette," a 16th Century French word. Don’t mix it up with today’s washroom. 6park.com

# T.S. Eliot praised Pound as the “inventor of Chinese poetry for our time." 6park.com

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William Logan, Pound's China / Pound's"Cathay" 6park.com

https://newcriterion.com/issues/2019/4/pounds-chinapounds-cathay 6park.com

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In the attached audio/video is a reading of Ezra Pound’s “ translation” of Li Bai’s quatrain (李白《五绝:玉阶怨》:玉阶生白露,夜久侵罗袜。却下水晶帘,玲珑望秋月。)Pound followed his Japanese consultants and called Li Bai “Rihaku” in his Cathay. I won’t fault him, given the language barrier. But then, for the same reason, his works are not translations in the strict sense. This one is more like it, though. 6park.com

The Jewel Stair’s Grievance  by Ezra Pound (1885-1972) 6park.com

The jewelled steps are already quite white with dew, 6park.com

It is so late that the dew soaks my gauze stockings, 6park.com

And I let down the crystal curtain 6park.com

And watch the moon through the clear autumn. 6park.com

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