试译莎士比亚的十四行诗：未见晨曦含碧眼 

（by 曹雪葵 2014.04.11）


未见晨曦含碧眼，
唇逊珊瑚艳。
酥胸难胜雪花白，
更叹铁丝翻卷满头栽。 

玫瑰娇贪终日瞅，
脸上何曾有？
春流香水漫林中，
何奈舒腮吐气冷如风。 

并枕依依说趣话，
难忍笛声哑。
梦观莲袜踏仙云，
惊醒一双大脚倒颠奔。 

孰料真情自青睐，
偏俺将她爱。 
双心一箭喜相逢， 
堪叹人间谁个与她同。  

（跋：顾名思义，英文十四行诗恰好十四行，汉语自然也是译成十四行才逗趣。结果俺一下笔，竟顺手译成了【虞美人】的句式，可【虞美人】是四句重叠，如果非拘泥十四行，则最后那句2+7的“恰似+一江春水向东流”可不能出场了。就这么着，俺给它扩建成了十六行。呵呵） 


莎士比亚原文： 

My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; 
Coral is far more red than her lips' red: 
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; 
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. 

I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, 
But no such roses see I in her cheeks; 
And in some perfumes is there more delight 
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. 

I love to hear her speak,--yet well I know 
That music hath a far more pleasing sound; 
I grant I never saw a goddess go, 
My mistress when she walks, treads on the ground; 

And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare 
As any she belied with false compare. 





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